blues & greys
you have a really nice style, i liked it better when you got away from the rhyme scheme and got into free verse. i am not an expert myself, and i don't know how much experiance as a poet, but this is my advice...beginner poets should stick wiht free verse so you can develop you own sense of style, you own voice, then get into structured poetry...that is just my take on it everyone has ther own way...mine is by no means right...just some advice
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