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Dark Poetry #3

Angel eyes

Starsfalling
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

0 posted 2003-09-17 06:42 PM

Sitting silent
Everything passing by
Without once taking notice
Then came one
With the eyes of a fallen angel
Moving the motionless
And stirring the heartless
She knows
She sees
She feels
One deep breath
To step from the shadows
One deep breath
To change forever
And always
Those eyes will be with me
And always I shall try to brighten them…

-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-09-17 10:35 PM

It's sweet that you want to be there for her. Nice to read.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-17-2003 10:35 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-09-18 05:16 AM

Nice writing...James

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

3 posted 2003-09-18 07:13 PM

I liked =) very touching. keep up the good work.

Starsfalling
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

4 posted 2003-09-18 07:54 PM

Thank You James, Shara, and River... hehe glad you all liked it.. it was inspired by A Perfect Circle's 3 Libras... lol "Third Libra is a big fan of this song i do believe"

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

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