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Starsfalling
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some where deep in the shadows


0 posted 09-17-2003 06:42 PM       View Profile for Starsfalling   Email Starsfalling   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starsfalling


Sitting silent
Everything passing by
Without once taking notice
Then came one
With the eyes of a fallen angel
Moving the motionless
And stirring the heartless
She knows
She sees
She feels
One deep breath
To step from the shadows
One deep breath
To change forever
And always
Those eyes will be with me
And always I shall try to brighten themů


-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

© Copyright 2003 Lance Keber - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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since 07-19-2003
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Somewhere out there~


1 posted 09-17-2003 10:35 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

It's sweet that you want to be there for her. Nice to read.

SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-17-2003 10:35 PM).]

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


2 posted 09-18-2003 05:16 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice writing...James
River
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my own little world


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I liked =) very touching. keep up the good work.
Starsfalling
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some where deep in the shadows


4 posted 09-18-2003 07:54 PM       View Profile for Starsfalling   Email Starsfalling   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starsfalling

Thank You James, Shara, and River... hehe glad you all liked it.. it was inspired by A Perfect Circle's 3 Libras... lol "Third Libra is a big fan of this song i do believe"

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

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