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Whisper Of Fate

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River
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since 09-16-2003
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my own little world


0 posted 09-16-2003 11:37 PM       View Profile for River   Email River   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for River


you make me wanna walk away
you make me feel sick today
I can't stand your ugly stares
you made me think nobody cares

your stench is only inches away
guess you decided to come out and play
Satan, quit haunting my dreams
you don't scare me with pitiful screams
Christ in me has made me strong
You think I'm still weak
but your dead wrong

get away from me Satan
this I command in the name of Christ
I will not give up with out a fight
you begin to laugh, then brought to silence
we shall no longer tolerate your sick defiance

goodbye snake
enjoy your trip to hell
the last trip you'll ever make
enjoy it well
© Copyright 2003 Bonnie Sue Clark - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 03-02-2003
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New York


1 posted 09-17-2003 01:30 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Bonnie - Welcome to PIP!
interesting write and I admire
your strength and faith
This, to me, is not dark
but highly spiritual
Please check your email for
a greeting from everyone here
at Passions!
xxoo
River
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since 09-16-2003
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my own little world


2 posted 09-18-2003 12:02 AM       View Profile for River   Email River   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for River

hey, thanx, for the card too, that was great what u did 2 it, i liked. lol, ur right, it's probably not...exactly dark, but i felt safer putting it here because it is one of the "darkest" poems i've written in awhile...uh...just forget it, lol. i'll find a dark one. soon. ttyl. God Bless.

                          

"The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 03-02-2003
Posts 9998
New York


3 posted 09-18-2003 03:24 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Oh no, this is lovely indeed
dark comes in many forms, m'friend
you have done beautifully
your most welcome
xxoo
River
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since 09-16-2003
Posts 623
my own little world


4 posted 09-18-2003 06:35 PM       View Profile for River   Email River   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for River

lol, ok, groovy gravy, =) i think i like this site so far. its koolio =)

"The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle

 
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