How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Dark Poetry #3 Archive
 Till the music's over
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Till the music's over

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 02-28-2003
Posts 894


0 posted 09-16-2003 08:16 AM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mysticpoe

Like before - I can hear,
those caroling sounds
of delightful pleasure
and unyielding anger.
This place for both,
where memory is lost
between the lines,
And once,
we’re we came from.
Is only known by who we are now.
Soon time will become my shelter.
As this stay delivers - another
reason why
perfection does exist.
Like before,
I’ll play as the trumpets entertain:
Waiting --
Till the music’s over. Once again.


If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (09-17-2003 08:33 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 mysticpoe - All Rights Reserved
eor
Senior Member
since 09-26-2002
Posts 968
blues & greys


1 posted 09-18-2003 02:00 AM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

great write as always...but i guess my mind is warped, i am gonna have to disagree, perfection does not exist...not to take anything away from your writing cause it rocks...but that is my thought

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

eor
Senior Member
since 09-26-2002
Posts 968
blues & greys


2 posted 09-18-2003 02:01 AM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

p.s. wonder why i am the first post adn this was posted days ago??????????
mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 02-28-2003
Posts 894


3 posted 09-18-2003 11:33 AM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

Hey eor, thanks again. I was worried about being shut-out, ( sort of like the Red Sox's were last night ). Maybe I'm slacken a bit? Thanks again for saving the shut-out.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
Senior Member
since 09-26-2002
Posts 968
blues & greys


4 posted 09-18-2003 08:22 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

SURE THING!!!!!!! :Backtotop:
they took my smiley aay
"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

[This message has been edited by eor (09-18-2003 08:24 PM).]

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 02-28-2003
Posts 894


5 posted 09-19-2003 11:41 AM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

eor, your the best. A poet's friend for all poet's. Maybe I'll take a break for awhile. Catch you later man, and thanks again.-- poe.
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 03-02-2003
Posts 9998
New York


6 posted 09-19-2003 12:11 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

poe, dont go please . . .
I completely understand this, but not until this time in my life , as it always seems:

And once,
we’re we came from.
Is only known by who we are now.

YES EXACTLY!
beautiful writing  
xxoo
Mad_Hatter
Member
since 06-29-2003
Posts 397
Canada


7 posted 09-19-2003 04:00 PM       View Profile for Mad_Hatter   Email Mad_Hatter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mad_Hatter

Wonderful write...wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.  
click1
Member
since 03-25-2003
Posts 156
usa


8 posted 09-25-2003 06:12 PM       View Profile for click1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for click1

I really like this one...It has...what?..Uh, made me slow down and think..Thank You "Peo"...
  Thanx!!

Click

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 02-28-2003
Posts 894


9 posted 09-26-2003 08:06 PM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

littlewing, your lasting benevolent aura becomes you, and I thank you!

Mad_Hatter, thank you for the very kind response - much appreciated. Thanks again.

click1, Thank you so much for stopping by. I glad you enjoyed. Thanks again.

Thanks to ALL of you very much, and another thanks to you again, eor.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Dark Poetry #3 >> Till the music's over Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors