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green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx


0 posted 09-15-2003 01:17 AM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for green_itchy_stuff


Just an innocent curse
Robbed of my own
Beaten, scars of proof
Senseless complications
A poltergeist all for me
Whips and chains become my friends

Tied down with little pity
Captured by a greedy friend
Haunting heavy she plays her games
I said I was sorry but she wants control
Fear and stubborness I cant give up

Choosing and permission to do so
Isnt it time for something different
From behind they stare
Take whatever get free
What rape is like
And no chance to forget

Settled and unkept
Vile this stench unjust
Steel is colder than her raw meat
Salt and grease
It doesnt make sense

Pitter patter and now worry some more
Dabbler extra paranoia
They'll skin me for sure
These beasts near, right over my shoulder
Standing gaurd of success, keep it back
Realization doesnt come easy

A whisper, blitz my sight
Information in my ear
Two or three damned
Theyed like a souvenir
On a stick,truth is truth
My head is gone in the weight of an axe

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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Mad_Hatter
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since 06-29-2003
Posts 397
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1 posted 09-15-2003 02:29 AM       View Profile for Mad_Hatter   Email Mad_Hatter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mad_Hatter

A single word comes to mind : Powerful.  Well done *get's on knees and kisses your feet*.  
littlewing
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since 03-02-2003
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New York


2 posted 09-15-2003 09:37 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

ok my demented mind thought of complete submission . . .
please elaborate if I am wrong
nice write Craig
xxoo
eor
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since 09-26-2002
Posts 968
blues & greys


3 posted 09-15-2003 03:21 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

sounds like you are trapped...good write i am going to add this, then print it and put it in my book, i have often felt likr this latley wiht school and work and school and work and school and work.....

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 09-16-2003 12:14 AM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Wow.  Thanx.  

Mad- I accept your honor. hehe

littlewing- Elaboration,  do you know what its like to feel like you have "evil" spirits chasing you, whispering crap in your ears.  Well I was in the craft for a while and got out.  A few days ago I was at a friends house and her and a few of her friends are in it.  One thing lead to another and I put my pentacle back on.  Last night it was like the two "spirits" that haunted me before were back and I felt trapped, and it felt like this is what they wanted me to write like some kind of prophetic plan they have for me.  I took my pentacle back off.

eor- as always i feel blessed or even empowered by the respect in your response.  Thanx.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

 
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