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Starsfalling
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some where deep in the shadows


0 posted 09-14-2003 08:42 PM       View Profile for Starsfalling   Email Starsfalling   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starsfalling

Silence,
Forever and ever
Listen close
Or youíll missÖ..
That one moment where,
I care
You wonít listen
Not even for a moment
You never cared for anyone,
But yourself
Donít even try to explain,
Iím done listening
So forget the silence
It only lasted
One moment

meh its kinda old but i changed it around a little
tell me what you think
-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

© Copyright 2003 Lance Keber - All Rights Reserved
mysticpoe
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1 posted 09-14-2003 09:53 PM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

I like the direction here. 1st 5 lines started the read real nice.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Lexy
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2 posted 09-15-2003 05:22 PM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lexy

A bit ironic. I liked it, good job lance.
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