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brian sites
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0 posted 09-14-2003 02:27 AM       View Profile for brian sites   Email brian sites   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for brian sites


stare helpless at the hand

figure it's geometry
        the leverage is all wrong
it can't work
    the way it should
stupid flesh

stupid
stupid
flesh

never married to this steel
properly

wood feels good
but
that is illusion

awkward angles
       will kill
despair's hope

go instead
go
look at the dung-eyed wonder
in the poetry of mirrors

small
insignificant little bug
       with nobody to squash you

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littlewing
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1 posted 09-14-2003 01:06 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Bri - dont you dare make me look at myself!
Goddd . . . scary . . .
*smile*
insignificant?  no  
but I understand
xxoo
mysticpoe
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2 posted 09-14-2003 09:55 PM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

Nice metaphors, nice write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

serenity blaze
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3 posted 09-15-2003 06:05 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

If you are a beetle, I must be the dung...

smile.

And I wanted to be on top, too.

*pout*

sigh.

missing you hard right now...
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


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Smiling at you...and chuckling at Karen...smile

Very cool, Bri...love this...

Hugging you both...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

littlewing
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5 posted 09-18-2003 03:25 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

this needs to breathe . . .
Susan Caldwell
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stupid
stupid
flesh

Loved that.


Susan
 
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