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the vampire conversion

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Brigid WillowKeeper
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0 posted 09-13-2003 09:35 PM       View Profile for Brigid WillowKeeper   Email Brigid WillowKeeper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brigid WillowKeeper


Another metal song by me

Gazing into a mirror
What dost thou see?
You see me?
I see me too
But where are you?

You walk alone
in the dark cold night
No one ever knows you're there
but me.

You don't eat
lest not in front of me
but the day will come
when you drink my blood.

This day hath come
but you save me
if I die you die too.
The deed hath been done.

Gazing into the mirror.
What dost I see?
I see you
you see you too...

But Where Am I?

[This message has been edited by Brigid WillowKeeper (09-13-2003 09:36 PM).]

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littlewing
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1 posted 09-13-2003 09:39 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

hmm . . . I would think you were right by his side there . . . and didnt think that if chosen, death occurred.

Vamps huh?
nicely put
xxoo
mysticpoe
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2 posted 09-14-2003 10:00 PM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

Nice metaphorical write. Enjoyed the path of deepness here.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Brigid WillowKeeper
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3 posted 09-15-2003 09:54 PM       View Profile for Brigid WillowKeeper   Email Brigid WillowKeeper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brigid WillowKeeper

Thanks all, mysticpoe, I love the screename
eor
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4 posted 09-18-2003 02:03 AM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

everywhere...good write

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

 
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