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eor
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since 09-26-2002
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blues & greys


0 posted 09-13-2003 08:23 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for eor


In all but us is all but we seek.
Green moss on your peach hips-
How I love but to get one kiss,
Can you see my purple pain-
Can you feel my yellow energy-
Can you understand my blackened mind?
Am I all but me inside of we,

The he inside of she-
The us inside of us.

I see the orange red pain in your heart,
Spilling out for my ugly blue eyes to see,
It saddens me, I want to heal your pain.
I love you.
Can you feel my pink passion-
Can you taste my fleshy love.

I am but a color inside of clear-
Can you see me when all is dark?
And I am you only light,
Will you come to my angelic glow?

Will you see me there in the dark?


"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

[This message has been edited by eor (09-13-2003 08:24 PM).]

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SharaRose
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since 07-19-2003
Posts 2535
Somewhere out there~


1 posted 09-13-2003 08:40 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

How could they not come to your light? Even in your darkest point, good resides. If it did not, you wouldn't care. Well that's what came to my mind. Me thinks you could use a

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
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since 03-02-2003
Posts 9998
New York


2 posted 09-13-2003 09:36 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Matt: the first line got me right off the bat , so so true:

In all but us is all but we seek.

truly
and if she doesnt see or understand
she is a fool
I adored this write and yes
I'll double what Shara said



love your signature btw LMAO true so true
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (09-13-2003 09:37 PM).]

green_itchy_stuff
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since 06-26-2003
Posts 1937
New Caney, Tx


3 posted 09-14-2003 02:27 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Thats pretty thick and deep.  Nice write.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

mysticpoe
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4 posted 09-14-2003 10:18 PM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

eor, the first and last lines fit very nicely. Like sandwiching the entire meaning. Great form. Oh, take it easy on the blue eye's.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
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since 09-26-2002
Posts 968
blues & greys


5 posted 09-15-2003 03:30 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

Terri-thanks i needed a hug

Sue-when i write there is no revision process(if my professors knew they would kill me, lol)i just write what comes to the mind.  and yeah i like my signiture too, it says it all.  thank you

Greeny-thanks as alwyas for stopping by to see little ol me.

Poe-last but not least, always, thanks my man for giving me a look see, and next time i will try to tkae it easy on the ol blue eyes.

Thank you, all of you

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

Lexy
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since 01-28-2003
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California


6 posted 09-15-2003 05:09 PM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lexy

wow..I'm fasinated by this one.
You outdid yourself. Amazing...

I am but a color inside of clear-

I loved this line. It is obvious and beautiful that you are in love.
~Lex
eor
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Posts 968
blues & greys


7 posted 09-16-2003 12:22 AM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

wow lexy...you hit it on the nose...

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

cusick
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since 07-27-2003
Posts 673


8 posted 09-27-2003 10:47 AM       View Profile for cusick   Email cusick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cusick

Self analysis cand be pretty scary. I think this is one of your best, it made me think.Luv maggie
Mad_Hatter
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since 06-29-2003
Posts 397
Canada


9 posted 09-27-2003 04:42 PM       View Profile for Mad_Hatter   Email Mad_Hatter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mad_Hatter

Nicely done man, very beautiful and the use of colours in the descriptions was a very, very nice touch.  Great write.
 
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