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the way she walks

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Endlessecho
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0 posted 09-12-2003 02:50 PM       View Profile for Endlessecho   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Endlessecho

Terror is irrevocably written in the way she walks.
It touches lightly, every step.
And her eyes scan much more than every face,
but takes in a shifted gait, a slight movement of hand.
And her back becomes rigid, her breathing stirred.
Smiling, she hopes no one notices
The way her pace quickens
as she steps aside
and yet never leaves the terror behind.
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1 posted 09-13-2003 11:10 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Echo - this is absolute perfection
Amazing writing . . .
xxoo
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