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Endlessecho
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since 2003-09-05
Posts 398
I live within myself

0 posted 2003-09-12 02:50 PM


Terror is irrevocably written in the way she walks.
It touches lightly, every step.
And her eyes scan much more than every face,
but takes in a shifted gait, a slight movement of hand.
And her back becomes rigid, her breathing stirred.
Smiling, she hopes no one notices
The way her pace quickens
as she steps aside
and yet never leaves the terror behind.

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-09-13 11:10 AM


Echo - this is absolute perfection
Amazing writing . . .
xxoo

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