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Dark Poetry #3

what haven't you done

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-09-12 10:30 AM

listen to my heart beat
feel my heart break
what have you done
my body cannot take this
watch it crumble into dust
why am I no more
what have you done
drink my blood from me
skin pale I've run dry
my warmth is your own
what have you done
where is this place of darkness
from where do you come
taste my trembling fear
what have you done
I offer myself to you
do what you will take so much
that I fade away from sight
forgotten by myself
what have I done?

I wrote this during choir. The mixture of music, depression and just me. And Mor-Estal thought of the title.

Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last.

[This message has been edited by teenpoet (09-12-2003 10:36 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-09-13 09:18 AM

Alicia - yes beautiful choice on the title and this just aches . . . but?
know that you are the one in control here
nice writing
xxoo

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