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Not Knowing

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SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~


0 posted 09-11-2003 03:09 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SharaRose

Not Knowing



You say I am arrogant
Of my demise you chant
All I do in your eyes is rant
Well see the truth you can't
Leave the human mind
to not knowing
Angst, and anxiety
will be showing
Hurt, and pain
and anger will
be flowing
When you
leave the
mind to
Not
know-
ing.




*My pain is always your Ice cream cone!

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
Endlessecho
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1 posted 09-11-2003 03:12 PM       View Profile for Endlessecho   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Endlessecho

Neat how you formed the picture!  and the message it conveyed.  Sad when someone finds pleasure from our pain.  

I liked this.  

Thank you for all your kinds reviews, as well.
SharaRose
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2 posted 09-11-2003 04:04 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Endlessecho, and thank you. You are very welcome. It is my pleasure!

SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-11-2003 04:06 PM).]

littlewing
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3 posted 09-12-2003 02:04 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Shara!  A form poem!
very cool . . . have never done this
awesome job
xxoo
SharaRose
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4 posted 09-12-2003 11:17 AM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Hey Littlewings...words that are much appreciated!! and bless ya bunches!


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

eor
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5 posted 09-13-2003 08:04 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

visuals sometimes help get the point across so much better, but even wihtout this was a great poem!

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

SharaRose
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6 posted 09-13-2003 08:30 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Thank you eor...I appreciate your words. You are sweet.  I didn't set out to do the visual it started shaping up to be a cone and then it came to mind how this person sees my pain as something sweet to him. So I made the statement about it being like ice cream to him. Some say it like icing on the cake.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

mysticpoe
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7 posted 09-14-2003 10:10 PM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

Leave the mind to not knowing. A bundle of wisdom here. Nice write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

SharaRose
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8 posted 09-15-2003 10:13 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Thank you Mysticpoe for seeing there is some wisdom in this. If you leave the human mind to not knowing it can imagine all sorts of the worst. That I would not do to someone. I would feel if I can do something to settle any questions within them who am I to withold if I can be of help?? It's not paranoid...that's just this persons scapegoat psycho babble to excuse what HE witholds. Trying to justify his actions to be a balm for his soul. If it makes him feel better that's all that matters to him, because if it helps me he will withold it, becuase he said he would. Sooo hence that's why I say just leave me alone. HE is the one that CHOOSES not to leave it. Then he goes around telling people (I) won't leave him alone. If you keep taunting a person they aren't going to disappear. They will try to find out why the other keeps tormenting them and try to settle it. Make sense? Or sounds like paranoia? I have NEVER, not once asked this person to stay with me and HE knows it.

Thank you!
SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-15-2003 10:14 PM).]

 
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