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Endlessecho
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since 2003-09-05
Posts 398
I live within myself

0 posted 2003-09-11 01:01 PM


Digging

The shovel in her hands
place splinters neatly underneath her calluses.

She pauses briefly to wipe her bangs
from her sweat covered forehead.

She releases a held breath;
a breath of self-pity and an intake of guilt.

Her eyes wander briefly,
but settle back down to the earth below her feet.

The earth that is slowly ebbing away
from the hole she is digging.

My mother is digging my grave.

I watch from my bedroom window
out to the large backyard;

Wishing we had neighbors
to notice her laborious work.

Hating living in the country;
where what goes on behind closed doors
stays there,

And people aren’t close enough to stare
or care.

And my mother is digging my grave;
And all I can do is watch.

I search my eyes along the ground
where I will lay beside my sisters.

She buried them some time before.

And I miss them.
And I miss my mother.

She never comes in the house anymore.
She has a task to care for.

My mother is busy
Digging my grave.

And all I can do is watch her.



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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-09-11 01:53 PM


I can't say I really understand this, but it sounds *very* painful. :'(
Sending a

SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-11-2003 01:53 PM).]

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-09-12 02:03 AM


Echo - Oh My God - you have NO idea how this spoke to me tonight . . .
this is brilliant!

a breath of self-pity and an intake of guilt.

ahhh she is digging mine too
xxoo

Endlessecho
Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398
I live within myself
3 posted 2003-09-12 10:57 AM


Shara - Thank you for your kind words.

littlewing - I'm so glad I could touch you with this. Thank you!


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