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The Shine of Power

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 06-26-2003
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New Caney, Tx


0 posted 09-11-2003 12:57 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for green_itchy_stuff


Its like a gentle damp light
Constrution from percision splits in the lower back
Exactly what I wanted and
The illegal glow thick in cash

Develope nicely
Hard unbroken and command
Concentrate on project by hand
Leaving no process unturned

Its when it swallows the air around
That it seems to be a way of life
Profound and admired of spirit

This work comes from shaky walls
And an imitation of reality

Pleasure and enjoyment electric view

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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since 07-19-2003
Posts 2535
Somewhere out there~


1 posted 09-11-2003 01:57 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Itchy, I'm not sure what this means, but thanks for sharing. I like reading you and figuring it all out. One part I kind of (thought) I might know what it means, but not sure of it.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Lexy
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since 01-28-2003
Posts 1049
California


2 posted 09-11-2003 09:58 PM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lexy

music...could this be about music? My interpretation anyhow. I like your poetry, its adaptable, its a good thing. I like how often you post, I write so much it's crazy. Its good to know someone writes and thinks as hard as I do.
~Lex
littlewing
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since 03-02-2003
Posts 9998
New York


3 posted 09-12-2003 02:10 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Craig, I do not know why but this reminded me of the street . . .
you know . . . the life - the power
the buzz:

Its when it swallows the air around
That it seems to be a way of life

YES . . . nice job
xxoo
green_itchy_stuff
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since 06-26-2003
Posts 1937
New Caney, Tx


4 posted 09-12-2003 01:05 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Shara- thanx its basically about pretty much any of the performing arts or visual.

Lexy- thanx.  Yeah and actually I dont get a whole lot of time to be on-line anymore, but I do what I can.  

littlewing- thanx.  I hadnt intented for it to be that way but it does have that ring to it.  

Craig

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

eor
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since 09-26-2002
Posts 968
blues & greys


5 posted 09-13-2003 08:02 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

you know i am ver amazed from your writing, you have come such a long way in a little bit of time, i remember one fo your first posts, you are not even a shadow of the writer you used to be.  great wirte.

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

green_itchy_stuff
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since 06-26-2003
Posts 1937
New Caney, Tx


6 posted 09-14-2003 02:20 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Wow.  Thanx.  I'm not sure what to think.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

mysticpoe
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since 02-28-2003
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7 posted 09-14-2003 10:08 PM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

Electric view. Never heard that before. I really like it. Brings sparks to the poem. Nice write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

 
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