"broken peices floating round
that one's me and that one's thou
I am alone and yet surrounded
by empty death and deadly tears"
Whoa... Just.... whoa.....
I feel like you are inside my mind with this piece, it's almost scary, in a good way. :p I'm sorry I haven't e-mailed you back yet, I've been working like you would not believe.
I love the way this piece was phrased, it flowed so well, and had a subject matter that seems fresh, though penned for years and years. I really enjoyed this and am adding it to my library.