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Don't Cry

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Mor-Estal Landis
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since 09-03-2003
Posts 11
Luca, Ventoren


0 posted 09-11-2003 10:38 AM       View Profile for Mor-Estal Landis   Email Mor-Estal Landis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mor-Estal Landis

If you're reading this note, then I finally hit the edge.
Don't worry though, there's nothing to dread.
I couldn't find enough reasons to keep on going.
Now I'm long gone and in your mind only.
Forgive me, for not saying my farewells,
But you would've tried to stop me, had I told all I had to tell.
Life in the after, is better I'm sure, so just remember to always pray for me and keep my picture in your mind.
And now that it's over, all this drama, and I've gone and died.
Please promise me one thing, you won't cry.

Chorus x2
Because now that I'm gone and in the after you'll live better,
And when you recall our time togerther don't remember all the lies.
Just hold on the visions of us when we were together.
And promise me one thing, you won't cry, not ever.

You never saw the real me, only an illusion.
The good side, never the bad, never confusion.
So here's the real truth, the life of a failure, with a noose tight around his neck, and livin in a trailer.
Never cared what happen to myself, as long as you where smilin.
But please don't follow me and this thug whilin.
Or live life your own way,
Be my opposite, and live to see another day.
Because even though I'm gone, and lost my last fight.
Suicide deep in the night,
Don't worry, I'll find my light, and somehow manage to be alright.
Just don't forget I loved you with all that had and could find.
But promise me one thing, you won't cry.

Chorus x2

A small sing thingy I came up with when listening to Twiztid's "I'm alright" Song.

[This message has been edited by Mor-Estal Landis (09-11-2003 10:46 AM).]

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serametheicebound
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since 09-04-2003
Posts 8
South Africa-Free State


1 posted 09-11-2003 11:54 AM       View Profile for serametheicebound   Email serametheicebound   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serametheicebound

I like the way u rhyme and i like the way u write.Keep on rhyming it's good for yo health.Thanks fo being talented u deserve to go somewhere in deep pits of coup.

The Conquest Is My Daily Testament

teenpoet
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since 10-17-2001
Posts 287
Michigan


2 posted 09-11-2003 03:26 PM       View Profile for teenpoet   Email teenpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teenpoet

Hey Estal,

'member when you asked if I would be unhappy if you and Fyrefly died?  I would be and I would cry for you both.  But don't tell anyone that and besides I would cry in secret.  Besides I'm NOT kind and caring and loving and compassionate and all that jack.  So don't even say it. That's just mean.  

Anyhow I liked this one.  Actually, I like almost anything you write.  Keep writing.  And what did you mean by I should write out more and keep more of my poetry?  Nobody's been telling you I throw it away, have they?

Anyhow....love ya much see ya later
Always,  Blue~Phoenix

Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last.

teenpoet
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since 10-17-2001
Posts 287
Michigan


3 posted 09-11-2003 03:27 PM       View Profile for teenpoet   Email teenpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teenpoet

Oh and I noticed that you changed some of what I typed for you.  Sorry I typed it wrong.
littlewing
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since 03-02-2003
Posts 9998
New York


4 posted 09-12-2003 02:06 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Estal:

this is amazing . . .
a rap for sure, please put this to music
awesome writing

Just don't forget I loved you with all that had and could find.

and yes, beautiful
xxoo
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