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You Call Me Rain

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SharaRose
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0 posted 09-11-2003 02:35 AM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SharaRose

You Call Me Rain


You call me rain and say
Come again some other day
All you do is push me away
Why must I forever pay?


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
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1 posted 09-11-2003 10:03 AM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lexy

Cute title. I think you could expand on theses thoughts though. Very nice Shara!  

[This message has been edited by Lexy (09-11-2003 10:04 AM).]

SharaRose
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2 posted 09-11-2003 10:11 AM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Thanks Lexy... Please please please give me some suggestions? I would love it.

SharaRose @-->--


p.s. feel free to email me some suggestions if you'd like.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-11-2003 10:13 AM).]

Endlessecho
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3 posted 09-11-2003 12:48 PM       View Profile for Endlessecho   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Endlessecho

I like this.  I think it says it all!
SharaRose
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4 posted 09-11-2003 01:49 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Thanks Endlessecho.. I appreciate your thoughts.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
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5 posted 09-12-2003 01:58 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Shara this reads just fine, but I see a senyru in there
5 - 7 - 5   3 lines
good job
xxoo
SharaRose
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6 posted 09-12-2003 11:13 AM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Thank you littlewings...it's just all I could think to say. I didn't know what else to write. And thanks for the compliment. I would love to learn how to *really* write. So many of you here on this site are far above amazing... you are all fantastic!!!

Bless ya girl,
Shararose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx


7 posted 09-12-2003 01:12 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Simple and and cool.  This is like {of course} a nursery rhyme and yet it still has the deeper feelings of an adult.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

SharaRose
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8 posted 09-12-2003 05:25 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Thanks Itchy, I appreciate you reading, and the comment. Nice to see you here again.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Mad_Hatter
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9 posted 09-12-2003 06:58 PM       View Profile for Mad_Hatter   Email Mad_Hatter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mad_Hatter

Very nicely written, so simple, yet so very effective, amazing...*tips hat*.
SharaRose
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10 posted 09-12-2003 07:01 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Thank you Hatter...I appreciate your thoughts. I haven't seen you for a little while. I hope things are well with you.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
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11 posted 09-13-2003 09:33 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Oh Shara, no, I didnt mean it like that
you do really write . . .
all of us have our own style
is what makes us different
and this site amazing
Just trying to see what you have in there
sorry my mind sometimes does that
I love to try different forms all the time
and different styles
This was perfect
xxoo
SharaRose
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12 posted 09-13-2003 12:11 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

hehehe No sweetie...I knew what you meant. Believe me you have no worries, because I know what you were saying. You are a sweetie pie, and I know when you speak you mean well!
Most of us know when someone is well meaning. You can usually tell! I've seen enough of ones that aren't to tell the difference. and more

SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-13-2003 12:14 PM).]

eor
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blues & greys


13 posted 09-13-2003 07:53 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

SharaRose
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14 posted 09-13-2003 08:32 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Maddy vanD
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15 posted 09-17-2003 10:35 PM       View Profile for Maddy vanD   Email Maddy vanD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Maddy vanD

I really like this one, I admire your ability to say so much with so few words....a skill I lack.

Maddy
Poetry is not pretty....poetry is real

SharaRose
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16 posted 09-17-2003 10:41 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Thank you Maddy I am glad you liked. I appreciate your comment. But I have read yours, and they are wonderful!!! Stories that I love to read. Laughs I have gotten when I most needed them are a blessing for me. Thanks for sharing *all* of yours. They are always a delight!!

Shara @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

 
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