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ShannonMarie
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since 09-09-2003
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in a state of being


0 posted 09-10-2003 08:38 AM       View Profile for ShannonMarie   Email ShannonMarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ShannonMarie


All through the night, I hear the rain,
playing a musical show.
The dropping rain does make a promise,
a promise of a rainbow.

The rainbow signifies happy smiles,
that I will see today.
The rainbow colors dance around,
making smiles play.

On my face there is no smile,
only rain you can see on me.
This rain also makes a promise,
a rainbow that you never did see.

It doesn't make smiles play,
it only makes you cry.
A rainbow with such pain inside,
Cursed by the rains good-bye.

My tears have washed away the colors,
so the colors will never show.
This rainbow signifies how I feel,
the raindrops from this colorless rainbow.
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Maddy vanD
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since 09-06-2003
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Newfoundland, Canada


1 posted 09-10-2003 09:05 AM       View Profile for Maddy vanD   Email Maddy vanD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Maddy vanD

A really nice image that, a rainbow with no colours, and a good metphor as well. All in all a good poem.

Maddy
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Lexy
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since 01-28-2003
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2 posted 09-11-2003 10:02 PM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lexy

ahhh. this is sad and cute at the same time. Wow...interesting thoughts, this was very creative. I got a little tongue tied..or something, at parts.
Nice.
~Lex  

[This message has been edited by Lexy (09-11-2003 10:02 PM).]

littlewing
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3 posted 09-12-2003 02:11 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

ahh Shannon, but here you are a spectrum!
nice job
xxoo
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