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ShannonMarie
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since 2003-09-09
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in a state of being

0 posted 2003-09-09 12:44 PM



everything is on the line,
when your lips are touching close to mine.
I feel your breath upon my skin,
I can't resist this perfect sin.

I see the passion in your eyes,
like rage & thunder through the skies,
with each crack I hear my name,
as you touch drives me insane.

we both are to another vowed,
but nothing seems to mater now,
the passion flames we ride are hot,
regrets for now we have not.

we fell out of love, and with eachother fell in,
and so we commit the most dangerous sin,
you are a gift, from up above,
I feel this everytime, that we make love.

so lay now silent, our love spilled,
till darkness falls, and desires fullfilled,
when no one speaks, but love shouts clear,
to loss it all, my greatest fear.

© Copyright 2003 Shannon Marie - All Rights Reserved
Ivy
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since 2003-09-08
Posts 7

1 posted 2003-09-09 03:51 PM


I like reading and writing poetry about love making that is not too graphic or too sappy.

This is perfect, and has a solemn feel to it that I really like. Lovely poem!

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