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green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx


0 posted 09-09-2003 01:33 AM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for green_itchy_stuff


Pretend always great
Fake
Obvious
Snare I decide

Make the gap wider
Full of empty souls

Obituary list
Of obsolete
Teattered and determined

Simple game of contact
Paranormal paradox
Something rattled orthodox

Make the gap wider
Full of empty souls

Decency obscene
Medium commitment
Purchase for some cash

Illegal freedom
Tied to desire
Hatch and their violent

Open up the gates
Reign of terror

Fine glow of fire
Smolder
Punishment
Captured haze

Banging for liberty
Concealed from the sky

Rupture and disaster
Feel it in the grin
Filthy teeth
Childs play

No mass restructured order
Council fallen

Hussssshhhh

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
blackhalo
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Posts 467
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1 posted 09-09-2003 02:06 AM       View Profile for blackhalo   Email blackhalo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit blackhalo's Home Page   View IP for blackhalo

"Paranormal paradox
Something rattled orthodox

Make the gap wider
Full of empty souls

Decency obscene"

Gripped me with some obscene fear for some reason....  Why in the world I don't know, but you made me paranoid with this piece.  :confused:  Anyway, great read, I enjoyed it, as always.
~Alicia
teenpoet
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Posts 287
Michigan


2 posted 09-09-2003 02:52 PM       View Profile for teenpoet   Email teenpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teenpoet

I love your words.  And you use a lot of big words too. Congrats for you.  And I agree with Alicia.

Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last.

Lexy
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since 01-28-2003
Posts 1049
California


3 posted 09-09-2003 08:22 PM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lexy

Nice piece here Craig, I don't mean to be annoying or seem ignorant, but could you explain to me what exactly this poem means. I'm a liitle lost, sorry.

"Decency obscene
Medium commitment
Purchase for some cash"

irony. very nice, possibly my favorite part.

~Lex
Maddy vanD
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4 posted 09-10-2003 09:03 AM       View Profile for Maddy vanD   Email Maddy vanD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Maddy vanD

I'm afraid I must agree, I too am lost here, the words are evocative, but I can suss out no actual meaning....sorry.

Maddy
Poetry is not pretty....poetry is real

green_itchy_stuff
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5 posted 09-10-2003 02:37 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Thanx Alicia and teenpoet.
green_itchy_stuff
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6 posted 09-10-2003 02:42 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Thanx Lexy and Mad,
This is basically about at first being accidental, but wrong becoming right and the refusal of its correction.  The biblical punishment, change in the base of morality, and the "fall" this will cause.  Husshhhh

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

ShannonMarie
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since 09-09-2003
Posts 57
in a state of being


7 posted 09-10-2003 10:32 PM       View Profile for ShannonMarie   Email ShannonMarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ShannonMarie

what I got out of it was the fall of all that was once held to be right and moral.  I thought it was very good.
eor
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8 posted 09-10-2003 11:27 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

i understand this one completly, riviting baby, great write...adding this

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

green_itchy_stuff
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9 posted 09-11-2003 12:39 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

thanx Shannon, thats pretty much what I had intented to say.

And eor, damn dude, hell yeah.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

 
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