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Betrayal
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Betrayal |
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Ivy New Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 7 |
"Betrayal" Oh,look The betrayal has started to stem How surprizing You are no different than any of them I laugh, You think I won't do the same. You really think the player in me has gone away? But no, You started it, you are in for a ride... You hurt My poor feelings even though you never tried Kick back And relax for it is about to ensue... I proudly Killed many a man's spirit You're next! I will kill yours, too |
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Black_Knight Junior Member
since 2003-09-04
Posts 23England |
I really like poems that perfectly capture a thought, a feeling, and this does so. |
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Maddy vanD Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 99Newfoundland, Canada |
It sure as spit does eh? really good stuff this! Maddy |
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Ivy New Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 7 |
Thanks, it was meant to have a little bite to it. I wrote it the day my live-in boyfriend admitted to cheating. |
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