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green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx


0 posted 09-07-2003 11:25 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for green_itchy_stuff


Seconds and hours
Sing unheard
Massive roar
None hear
Silence

Push draw-string
Flying
Sky dive
Empty sack
Down forever

Justify
False notation
Implied denial
Shrinking strenght
No will power

Constant motion
Eat a brick
Stop
Out
Complete

The trusty falsehood
From the heart
Blistered back
Cant say
Didnt try

Full
Rage
Sickness
Struggle
Health

Drug content
Itchy stomache
Dizzy brain
Flattened ego
Easy release

Pointless
Pull
Stick
Loosen
Massacre

Silence
Comfort
Choose
Heard them fall
Conscious dead

Marble white
Pure
Real
Stuffy
Beautiful begin eternity

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
eor
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since 09-26-2002
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blues & greys


1 posted 09-10-2003 11:36 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

this is gooood...wonder why this had gotten so little attention

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

Lexy
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since 01-28-2003
Posts 1049
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2 posted 09-11-2003 10:10 AM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lexy

Even more choppy then usual, but still effective.

"Eat a brick"

Loved this line.

Great, but not your best.
~Lex
green_itchy_stuff
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3 posted 09-11-2003 12:41 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

thanx eor, i was assuming possibly a boycot.
lol

Thanx Lexy, Ill try harder next time.

GIS
littlewing
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since 03-02-2003
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4 posted 09-12-2003 01:54 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Craig, this reminded me of freefalling
kinda like a parachute with no pullchord
Nice job
xxoo
green_itchy_stuff
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5 posted 09-12-2003 12:58 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Thanx littlewing,  It does seem to have that feel to it.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

eor
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6 posted 09-13-2003 08:10 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

i hope it is not a boycot, if it is, it is only because they don't understand such a great writer

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

green_itchy_stuff
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7 posted 09-14-2003 02:18 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

yeah thanx man.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

 
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