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cuda04
Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 46
Wisconsin,USA

0 posted 2003-09-06 05:32 PM




Icebergs melting breezeless
On the desert’s dunes
Questions burning honest
Land of hope in ruins
Careful contemplation
Red lime petrified pain
Calculating trouble
Wishes cursed in vain
Praying please do hear me
Carried in your embrace
Mental fortitude discontinued
Losing life’s great race
Footfall’s ugly rhythm
Pursued by Satan’s swarm
Stopping giving up now
Sitting out the storm
Rain of scarlet envy
Thunder of regret
Tears of truth and passion
Horrors never to forget
Eyes scorching ice bergs
Questions of desert sand
Answers streaming water
Tears in the promised land

Always look forward, never look back, dreams are much more refreshing than regrets.

© Copyright 2003 Angie Ziobro - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-09-06 06:30 PM


love the rain of scarlet envy line it is so descriptive.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-09-07 10:19 AM


Angie, my goodness, I have fallen upon a beauty here
bow gracefully . . .
xxoo

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