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cusick
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since 2003-07-27
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0 posted 2003-09-06 01:33 PM


I open my eye
to a cold grey dawn.
A tentative toe
touches the floor.
quickly pulled to the
blankets once more.

No guilt.
No alarms,
the bed holds me
tight in its soft
cosy arms.

I drift
I doze.
Could stay here
all day if I chose.


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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2003-09-06 02:26 PM


Yes, I know the feeling. You protrayed it well. Made me want to crawl back to bed..I especially liked this part:
"A tentative toe
touches the floor.
quickly pulled to the
blankets once more."

~Lex

[This message has been edited by Lexy (09-06-2003 02:26 PM).]

cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

2 posted 2003-09-06 03:48 PM


Thank you Lexy. I am living my dream. Redundant I mean. Maggie
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2003-09-06 06:34 PM


Wouldn't it be nice if we could dream this dream forever, snug and warm in a womblike experience.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

4 posted 2003-09-07 08:54 AM


ooooooohKethry Maggie
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-09-07 10:20 AM


Maggie, me too , mann I just despisegetting out of bed
I loved this
xxoo

cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

6 posted 2003-09-07 12:45 PM


Thank you Littlewing, it is a drag isn't it. Maggie
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