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ForeverPoetic
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since 2003-09-05
Posts 28
Streaming down a tranquil sea

0 posted 2003-09-05 10:21 PM



Past Present and Future


Should i be happy that were just friends?
Or sad because thats all it will ever be
You say you cant be with me
Yet you kiss countless guys to relieve your dignity
To me this is bad as can be
I have no one in reality
In fantasy you are my lover
Past present and future


Stars, though unseen on dark nights. Are still there, just hidden away. Twinkling, winking at us, and laughing at our dismay

© Copyright 2003 James - All Rights Reserved
RioTgUrL
New Member
since 2003-08-25
Posts 8

1 posted 2003-09-05 11:57 PM


awwwwwwwwwwww.....nice poem...and cheer up!
post more!  O_O
love from RioTgUrL...Cali.

cusick
Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

2 posted 2003-09-06 01:09 PM


Stand up and be counted. Find another. Maggie
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-09-07 10:15 AM


James yes defintely agreeing with Maggie here . . . you deserve much better
xxoo

cuda04
Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 46
Wisconsin,USA
4 posted 2003-09-07 07:18 PM


This was great, I really did feel it...but watch your punctuation

Always look forward, never look back, dreams are much more refreshing than regrets.

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