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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
You called to us, from long ago. Followed From our seashores: The voices could be heard crossing onto the sands with dominance. You are the one. The deliverer, from those Moments, thus will they come. Traveling such distances foretold - Spreading the meaning of days - For each of us, will have to pay - And homage, will be the gate – Way. For the living and the dead. Their time and ours: Simmering like the act of justice displayed from only one. For the ending and us - So knows - So, will it be done. If nothing is something then everything is our thoughts and feelings and all that exists. [This message has been edited by mysticpoe (09-05-2003 03:47 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
poe, you are an amazing writer here: For each of us, will have to pay - And homage, will be the gate – Way. love the path you took here xxoo |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i have been away for a while, glad i came to this one first! Great write as always poe, bravo! "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is really a great poem. i enjoyed it every much and i hope to see more from you real soon. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
* littlewing, really enjoy you stopping by and taking in a read ALL THE TIME! Thanks for your support. Really appreciate your time. Oh!, by the way: your poem in Open, " River to Sea " is outstanding. Great - Great lines and creative thought - throughout the entire write. Very nice. Thanks again!! * eor, Great to hear from you again man. As always, the best to one of my MOST honored poets on this site. I'm anxiously waiting.. * Jeremiah, Thanks so much for taking the time to read. Really appreciate your comments. Glad you enjoyed the write. Thanks again. Again, Thanks to all of you!! mysticpoe If nothing is something then everything is our thoughts and feelings and all that exists. [This message has been edited by mysticpoe (09-07-2003 06:30 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
thank you poe . . . that was sweet of you and I applied for another stint in here with you guys if ya dont mind. I like it here feels homey xxoo |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Keep them coming, that was great. Maggie |
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