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Rejecting reflection

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Paragon
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0 posted 09-03-2003 04:20 PM       View Profile for Paragon   Email Paragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Paragon


I can't look into the mirror lately
Im nothing that I wanted to be
I can't get beyond what it is I see
fire in my eyes as shadows stalk me
I know I can't go back in time
no matter what I do I'll never be able to rewind
so I'll walk past the mirror convincing myself
that Im just fine...
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eor
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since 09-26-2002
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blues & greys


1 posted 09-03-2003 04:24 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

you are just fine, life goes on...good write

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

mysticpoe
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since 02-28-2003
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2 posted 09-04-2003 09:50 AM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

Nice, conveying feelings that most of us have. Like offering the question. What is more important, the beauty that we see or the beauty that they see?

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

littlewing
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since 03-02-2003
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3 posted 09-04-2003 10:17 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Paragon . . ughhh I know . . .
you are just fine and I know easy for me to say, right?
I know how you feel
nice write
xxoo
Endlessecho
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since 09-05-2003
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I live within myself


4 posted 09-05-2003 03:25 PM       View Profile for Endlessecho   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Endlessecho

Very relatable.  But who are we really fooling?

I like the words you used and how you presented them to convey these feelings.

Enjoyed the read!
Mad_Hatter
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since 06-29-2003
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5 posted 09-05-2003 06:20 PM       View Profile for Mad_Hatter   Email Mad_Hatter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mad_Hatter

In a way, we cannot change what we become, we can only fight and try and reinvent ourselves.  I too look in the mirror and see a failure, but i cannot regret the choices I made, because any choice i make is a part of me and to deny that choice is to deny a part of myself.  Wonderful words...wonderful.
Lexy
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since 01-28-2003
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6 posted 09-05-2003 11:01 PM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lexy

I hate mirrors, not because I dislike how, I look, its just too much reality to bear sometimes. These are honest thoughts...I felt your words. Nicely conveyed.
~Lex
Kethry
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7 posted 09-06-2003 07:14 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

an honest poem that reflects your feelings. I would only worry when all your mirrors are covered or smashed. *grin
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


Rosebud1229
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since 04-05-2000
Posts 1829
North Carolina


8 posted 09-10-2003 12:18 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

ah so sad, but never reject just remember the inside is truly where the beauty is,
as we get older we realize this even more,
great write.
Angel101óż!
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since 10-21-2007
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Lost in pain


9 posted 10-27-2007 07:11 PM       View Profile for Angel101óż!   Email Angel101óż!   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel101óż!

Very good write! r u a dude or dudet? how old r u? Just so u know im not a stalker!!!
 
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