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RennieandBoo
Junior Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 47
Florida!

0 posted 2003-09-03 04:17 PM



I may not be perfect
At least I’m fine
I have a life
Unlike you I don’t go around from town to town
My feet are planted in the ground Mr. Ladies Man

You think you’re so savvy and smart
Now you’re just a big ol’ fool and with small heart
Now Don’t Start

I may not be perfect
I may not be what you want
At least I have a life of my own
I can say what I want
Be what I want
Do what I want

I may not be perfect
I may not be perfect

Each one of us deserves some special lovin!

© Copyright 2003 Rennie - All Rights Reserved
eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-09-03 04:23 PM


no one is, good write

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2003-09-04 09:58 AM


Enjoyed this write, real nice emotion offered and sustained thru - out.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Lady Godiva
Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 35
at the bottom of your glass
3 posted 2003-09-04 08:28 PM



Yes exactly!!!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-09-04 10:47 PM


ahh Rennie . . .
perfection is soo boring anyhow
*smile*
not that I know . . .
but missy , what an insightful write you have here
good for you!
xxoo

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