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Dark Poetry #3

Hot Lips

RennieandBoo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-02

Posts 47
Florida!

0 posted 2003-09-02 09:56 PM

Such lips, what fine beauties they are they can
           Poison a mans soul with just one touch and yet... surges
           Your heart and burn fire into it...

So for I am still a virgin and have not tasted a
           Pair of such fine wine of a lips I remain unseen, and a
           Heart that burns so cool...

ShadowRaven
Member

since 2003-08-13

Posts 51

1 posted 2003-09-03 02:01 AM

title reminds of a character from M*A*S*H.

but onto the poem - I like it. Kissing can be very powerful, some you remember and some . . well some you wish you didn't

[This message has been edited by ShadowRaven (09-03-2003 02:02 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-09-03 05:02 AM

ahh Rennie . . . one day it will sneak up on you . . . the real thing when you arent looking . . . hold fast to those thoughts missy please . . .
*smile*
beautiful writing
xxoo

jbsoria
Junior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 26
Phoenix, Arizona

3 posted 2003-09-03 08:19 AM

I actually felt that one. Great job expressing yourself and your feelings.

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