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Starsfalling
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some where deep in the shadows

0 posted 2003-09-02 02:30 PM



A place filled only with darkness
An angel sits in quiet meditation,
Passing judgment upon a single man
A life of pain he lived,
Suffering beyond measure brought him down this path
“To heaven” the angel decides,
As she spreads her wings
A black blade appears between her breasts
Silently she slides to lie face down in the dirt
Turning in her last moments
She sees one of the fallen smiling above her
His body blackened and bloody
He is an angel of darkness and hatred
Turning he lets out a small chuckle as he takes the mans soul
“Hell is all he knows so that is where he shall stay” the fallen says
Her eyes fill with tears as she fades
Gone was the man’s hope
It lies murdered in a barren waste

-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

© Copyright 2003 Lance Keber - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-09-03 04:26 AM


Lance,
God I do adore the angels . . .
the dark ones too
but Goddd . . . judgement beyond
recognition here
More like deception
mischievious trickery
awesome writing
xxoo

Starsfalling
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since 2003-03-18
Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows
2 posted 2003-09-03 09:37 PM


thank you
lol angels are really cool lol thanks for the comments

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

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