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Born of Peace

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow


0 posted 09-02-2003 03:04 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kaoru

Running through my
dirty
past..

I corner thought as
my prisoner..
feelings burst as
red flower in
palm of
ivory white hand.

Like blood
splattered on
quiet wall.
You pound in waves..
you do
speak.

Not many
can
see
it.

Very few are allowed...
Inside the mind
of
where peace
is born.

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 09-02-2003 06:08 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

ahhh Meg, yess yesss
this is brilliant
not many no, if any right?
I love this and the metaphors
are astounding!
Great write
xxoo
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 09-02-2003 08:59 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Meghan~
This is lovely~

'where peace
is born'


I treasure this thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Lexy
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3 posted 09-02-2003 10:01 AM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lexy

"Like blood spattered on quiet wall."
I love this line.
Wow, excellent job Karou! amazingly done.
Bravo!!!
~Lex
green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 09-02-2003 07:39 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Im not going to disagree with anybody.  This is an excellent {Im not sure how to spell excellent.  Thats almost as bad as misspelling perfect. hehe.  Ah my spelling sux.  Id better stop before I just ruin this entire page.}  I liked.

Craig

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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5 posted 09-03-2003 01:39 PM       View Profile for cusick   Email cusick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cusick

Such a very interesting write. Thank you for sharing. Maggie
eor
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blues & greys


6 posted 09-03-2003 04:28 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

my gates are slammed and locked shut as well...lovley write as always!!! adding this

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

mysticpoe
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7 posted 09-04-2003 09:44 AM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

Really enjoy your thoughts and how they weave, using both sides of the coin as you make your statements thru your writing. Very good.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

bsquirrel
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8 posted 09-04-2003 05:29 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

This one hurts.
Lady Godiva
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I feel this aching pain...yes brillant..*hugs*
Joe Houck
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10 posted 09-16-2003 05:04 AM       View Profile for Joe Houck   Email Joe Houck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joe Houck

This is a very striking.
"I corner thought as
my prisoner.."
a feat I strive to accomplish everyday.
I liked the style of this poem as well.
You are a very talented writer..
Joe

"The worst vice is advice" (Al Pacino, devil's advocate)

 
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