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Blasted Impulse |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Control and quiver To myself I shiver Fear no more This dirty... Done the deeds Sell the seeds Plant the garden Infect with weeds Inferior souls everywhere Point and laugh At me they stare Give them some A dinomite stick of gum Chew and chew Kablam its done Watch people start to run The urge within Hold it in This urge within Filled with sin Respect and trust Hidden thrust Filthy blades Of psycho lust Dare to bleed Just plant the seed Let it grow A giant a weed ______________________________ Just random crap a trickle of music from a well |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
Quite good though..I liked the feel of the words as they rolled off....nice work.. Thanx! Click |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
This is dark and violent, filled with a hatred for some unseen force. You never give a true voice to your source of rage, which can be great or not so great. I think it worked very very well in this piece! The rythym kinda reminded me of an old pickup chugging down the road, which I also dug. All in all, this is a great write!  I enjoyed this a lot, Craig.~Alicia |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Dang, Itchy...Yikes..be careful, and don't blow a gasket, or something. This sounds danger...roussssss...  Wow. Scary! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
"Give them some A dinomite stick of gum Chew and chew Kablam its done Watch people start to run" Hardly crap. I found some of this quite insightful. I like the honesty to your words, you see the world for what it really is. I enjoyed this. ~Lex |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanks click1, thats pretty much how they words came out of my head Angry for an invisible reason, but angry nonetheless. thanx blackhalo yeah maybe i need some stress pills eh Shara Lexy-and I guess it should set me free then right. But yeah thats how I am basically. If someone asks I tell. Im pretty honest. GIS |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I am the same. I may appear secretive, but if anyone asks I pretty much tell. I also know that feeling of blind anger. I get that a lot. Then I start to think that I shouldn't feel so bad, because my lifes good...blah...blah. Everyones intitled to there own feelings regardless of the source... |
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