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Devil May Care Rake |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
A gay rake. Devil may care rake. 'till nature decrees, no more . He faces the ultimate, unnkown dakness, a blossomless tree, life laid bare. Death a fruitful ecstasy. Let us fold our hands and pray there is a better horison on his way. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Maggie, I know what you are saying here. Real nice write. I like the use of the rake. Raking the souls. Death a fruitful ecstasy. very nicely said. Nice read. mysticpoe If nothing is something then everything is our thoughts and feelings and all that exists. [This message has been edited by mysticpoe (08-29-2003 09:01 AM).] |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you mysticpoe. A delicate subject but I hope that I managed to put it across alright. Maggie |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
you put it across perfect, amazing write!! "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you eor. I didn't know wether to post it or not. Maggie |
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