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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2003-08-27 10:58 PM



imagination set free,
unlimited as the acres of open space
they lean against the sky with,

echos of what was
and what's rounding the corner,

source of confusion,
as i stumble on their fortress,

neck stretching seeking horizons
that diminish behind their stature,

later by moonlight,
they shelter me between them,

wrapping me womblike,
shielding me from places
i'm not quite ready to go


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-27-2003 11:29 PM).]

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-08-28 03:49 AM


God Michele, I was just thinking about the trees today myself and now I read this . . .
absolute submission to one who will
hold and protect you when frightened
This is amazing
nice to see you here too
*smile*
xxoo

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-08-28 09:41 AM


Trees...they are a wonder aren't they! I loved this. One wonder among many.


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Kaoru
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since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2003-08-29 12:42 PM


They do speak, don't they..and you born of their words..
gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
4 posted 2003-08-30 07:37 AM


Keeping this.

the wisdom in your words, comforts me every time.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
5 posted 2003-08-31 03:24 AM


We all have limitations.  Trees are kind of hard to put in words now that I really think about it.  In some respects theyre quite simple, but the way youve done it is pretty awesome.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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