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mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883


0 posted 2003-08-27 10:50 AM



Dream
go to
the Angel lair
that holds
you
when
Libra moments
saw the
awe
traveling
the suns
and the beginning
known
to some

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

© Copyright 2003 mysticpoe - All Rights Reserved
Gavin
Junior Member
since 2003-06-22
Posts 47

1 posted 2003-08-27 10:48 PM


that was cool mystic, short and sweet, except without the sweet and a kind of void replaced with nothingness........err, anyways i liked it, though i had to read a few times to catch the not so obvious but i finally did, write on
eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
2 posted 2003-08-27 11:52 PM


i liked this, direct and to the point,at least for me...

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
3 posted 2003-08-29 03:42 PM


wondering why this had gotten so little attention????

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

4 posted 2003-08-30 12:55 PM


Gavin, thanks for stopping by and taking a read. Your right about the feeling of void and nothingness. Where I always thought nothingness is something. Thanks again.

mysticpoe

eor, thanks again for stopping by. Your last write was awesome. Write on!!

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (08-30-2003 12:56 PM).]

cusick
Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

5 posted 2003-09-04 01:31 PM


This put me somewhere in space
but I don't know where
which I think is
as it should be
Sometimes it is
good to keep the reader
guessing. A lovely write. Maggie

Lady Godiva
Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 35
at the bottom of your glass
6 posted 2003-09-04 05:38 PM



I am a woman of very little words..so I do hope me saying I enjoyed this does this justice...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
7 posted 2003-09-04 10:43 PM


poe, for some odd reason this reminded me of Morrison:

". . . to the place of my birth . . ."
love reading you
xxoo

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

8 posted 2003-09-05 10:34 AM


* Maggie, your reply sounds better then my poem. Thanks again for stopping by.

* Lady Godiva, I always enjoyed a touch of class, Thanks again.


* littlewing, as always, much too-o-o kind.

Thanks again everyone.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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