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teenpoet
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since 10-17-2001
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0 posted 08-26-2003 10:26 AM       View Profile for teenpoet   Email teenpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for teenpoet

Screams of pain render sanity
nothing but the emptiness left
Here i am
left alone
scared and frightened of what I don't know
and don't understand
life pushes me away
death pulls me closer
not my choice
not my fault
how do I break away from it all
and spiral off into a nether place
where fae and vampiric run side
by side and leave me be
letting me learn what I will
and be what I so desire
free
free from humanity's restrainsts
their do's and don't's
crying softly in my sleep
lost in inhuman humanity
only want to get away
© Copyright 2003 Alicia Adams - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 03-02-2003
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New York


1 posted 08-26-2003 07:55 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

ahhh Alicia . . .
you are not alone, as we all fight
the restrictions of society and life
Just to be free of pain would be a dream
Just be sure you find that freedom here
*smile*
liked this write
xxoo
SharaRose
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since 07-19-2003
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Somewhere out there~


2 posted 08-27-2003 02:01 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Wow does this ever remind me of my teen years. I know it's no fun, but it will get better.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Gavin
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3 posted 08-27-2003 10:55 PM       View Profile for Gavin   Email Gavin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gavin

i liked it, you though have the same curse as me, you don't really find your rhythm until a couple of stanzas into it but once you do it really becomes something pretty good and that's in my opinion what happened here, the last 2 stanzas or so were really great, loved it, write on
blackhalo
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4 posted 08-28-2003 12:09 AM       View Profile for blackhalo   Email blackhalo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit blackhalo's Home Page   View IP for blackhalo

Great write, I really enjoyed it!  Thanks so much for sharing this.
~Alicia
eor
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since 09-26-2002
Posts 968
blues & greys


5 posted 08-28-2003 12:12 AM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

nice write

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

teenpoet
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6 posted 09-04-2003 09:50 AM       View Profile for teenpoet   Email teenpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teenpoet

Thanx for replying!  I'm not sure why I write what I do sometimes.  I don't always feel like what I write at that time.  The words just pour forth and that's it.  I write poetry all the time but almost all the poetry on here is not on paper.  And my poetry on paper is not on here.

I don't know what I did wrong but the fae are after me now. Faeries can be so irritable.

teenpoet
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7 posted 09-04-2003 10:15 AM       View Profile for teenpoet   Email teenpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teenpoet

Thanx for replying!  I'm not sure why I write what I do sometimes.  I don't always feel like what I write at that time.  The words just pour forth and that's it.  I write poetry all the time but almost all the poetry on here is not on paper.  And my poetry on paper is not on here.

I don't know what I did wrong but the fae are after me now. Faeries can be so irritable.

Mor-Estal Landis
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since 09-03-2003
Posts 11
Luca, Ventoren


8 posted 09-18-2003 08:17 AM       View Profile for Mor-Estal Landis   Email Mor-Estal Landis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mor-Estal Landis

Hey BP, nice piece work right here.

I share the same feelings as all of ya'all on this, but I've quit trying to 'escape' the pain. Rather now, Is use it. And this may confuse you BP, becuz I know it looks like my life is at least some what good, what with my fairchild and all. but even though I've been here for 16 years...ya'all still scare me a bit...I'm rambling now, sorry. But yea nice work and be sure to post that ryming one for them all eh?

Mor-Estal Landis, The Dark Star
"...Shadowed by Darkness, and Stalked by Despair..."

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