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cusick
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0 posted 2003-08-25 10:34 AM


I lie here alone
misery my only company,
years of trust
gone in a day,
memories filed
under forgotten.

No letters,
or calls,
no warning.

I lie here alone,
sadnessmy only solace.
I seek no other.



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eor
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blues & greys
1 posted 2003-08-25 01:12 PM


"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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2 posted 2003-08-25 01:57 PM


reading my mind, you are . . .
*smile*
xxoo

cusick
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3 posted 2003-08-25 03:25 PM


Thank you Eor and Littlewing, i think. Not sure if this is in answer to my poem. Maggie.
SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-08-25 05:02 PM


Come sit with me, and I will cry with you. No need to speak. Take a hug for as long as you want *if* you would like, if not there is no hurt feelings. :''( No need to explain what the problem is...You know what it is, and that's all that matters. My favorite song is "Hemmorhage" listen to it.. "Leave life bleeding in my hands" are the lyrics...just can't remember who sings it. My faveeeeeeee song of all!!!!

Shara...@-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-25-2003 05:04 PM).]

Mad_Hatter
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5 posted 2003-08-25 06:15 PM


Such a sad poem.  I know exactly how you feel.  Spectacular write.
cusick
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6 posted 2003-08-26 08:49 AM


Shara, this is verse in it's own righ.Thank you for replying .Maggie

cusick
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7 posted 2003-08-26 08:51 AM


Mad Hatter, thank you for your comments. Maggie.

SharaRose
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8 posted 2003-08-26 09:44 AM


You are very welcome! It's from my


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
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9 posted 2003-08-26 07:52 PM


Maggie, yes, it was in reply to this:

I lie here alone,
sadnessmy only solace.
I seek no other.

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