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Mad_Hatter
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since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada

0 posted 2003-08-24 11:40 PM


We were pretty dolls
Riding in white cars
Stopping for cameras
But now we just wait
For the next person
To dig a well
In our hearts


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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-08-25 01:23 AM


Ryan . . . why does this remind me of
Warhol and having your 15 minutes of fame?
nice write
truth be told, it applies to any of us, really
xxoo

Mad_Hatter
Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
2 posted 2003-08-25 03:57 AM


That was kind of my point.  We are all looking for our fifteen minutes of fame and once it's over we're willing to do anything to get another fifteen.
eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
3 posted 2003-08-25 12:52 PM


you can get another 15 in my book..lol...anyways great write, i like the metaphor for fame and glam in the write.

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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