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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-08-24 11:17 AM



Death appears by my hand
As I watch you leave into the Void
Your time done on this plane
It is the hour for you to journey
Yet you had not the strength to go
Without the help I so lovingly offered
You had no knowlege of what I had done
Or did you approve of my actions
By providing the thoughts into my brain
Whatever the case it is Time
And you must travel this path
Alone


We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.


[This message has been edited by Ringo (08-24-2003 01:03 PM).]

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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-08-24 11:48 AM


Brad, this reminded me of the letting go of several things:

self
someone who has passed
and someone who is living
*smile*
xxoo  

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-08-24 12:36 PM


Sounds *very* painful. It's also very sad. :'(

SharaRose @-->--

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