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cusick
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0 posted 2003-08-23 09:25 AM


Night Terror

How I'd love to wander
In solitude by night.
to look at stars,
to bathe in the moon's
mysterious light.

But desperate, pathetic
men wield a power
through the dark hours
causing untold damage and fear,

denying ourinnate
privileges.


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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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1 posted 2003-08-23 10:00 AM


How I'd love to wander
in solitude by night
to look at stars,
to bathe in the Moon's
mysterious light

Very nice lines, enjoyed

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

cusick
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2 posted 2003-08-24 10:04 AM


Thank you Mysticpoe. Glad you likes it .Maggie
littlewing
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3 posted 2003-08-24 10:30 AM


Maggie, this is beautiful!
Ahhh yes, to dance in the moonlight.
Ya know, you can.  Is why I love the night.
But, I do see your inclinations about
society there, grrr . . . I know
Have you tried a twirl in Open?
xxoo

cusick
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4 posted 2003-08-24 12:34 PM


Thank you Littlewing.I wonder if these thugs realise how they have changed our lifes.Why can't they stay home and write poetry. Maggie
littlewing
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5 posted 2003-08-25 01:27 AM


Maggie, that's why we are in here and they are out there, ya know?

[This message has been edited by littlewing (08-25-2003 01:53 PM).]

eor
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6 posted 2003-08-25 12:49 PM


the night can be a place of terror...

"But desperate, pathetic
men wield a power
through the dark hours
causing untold damage and fear,"

truer words have never been spoken, good write

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

cusick
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7 posted 2003-08-25 01:06 PM


Littlewing, absolutely true. Maggie
cusick
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8 posted 2003-08-25 01:07 PM


Eor, it is a sign of our times. Thank you for your reply. Maggie
ShadowRaven
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9 posted 2003-08-26 12:48 PM


Beautifu read - thanks for sharing it.
cusick
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10 posted 2003-08-26 08:57 AM


Shadow, pleased you liked it Maggie

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