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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2003-08-22 09:25 AM



You came from the dust carried
by the winds known as trilogy
and the truth sealed the future
covered by ocean forgiveness
like the depths within
hollowed out beginnings
were allowed
and we accepted the delivered
our memory sealed
with traveled darkness
eluding the difference
sent to us
we and dream as one
which laces our souls to come
they knew this toll
gathering the hymns
like winters place
our journey begins, again.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

© Copyright 2003 mysticpoe - All Rights Reserved
eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-08-22 02:35 PM


and yet our journy begins again, beautifully written! adding this

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2003-08-22 09:08 PM


Thanks again eor.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-08-23 10:52 AM


mystic, this is beautiful, gave me a sense of change, which is a good thing
xxoo

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

4 posted 2003-08-23 12:59 PM


Thanks for reading littlewing, Glad you enjoyed.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (08-23-2003 12:59 PM).]

Annie
Junior Member
since 2003-07-23
Posts 42
Seattle, WA
5 posted 2003-08-23 01:09 PM


"We and dream as one
which laces our souls to come . ."

Beautiful,  haunting............................

"Well I know, these voices must be my soul."   -Dave Matthews-

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
6 posted 2003-08-24 12:09 PM


This alone is a pretty darned good write...

"You came from the dust carried
by the winds known as trilogy
and the truth sealed the future"

Cool!

(And a thank you for rummaging around in the archives)

[This message has been edited by wranx (08-24-2003 12:11 AM).]

Mad_Hatter
Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
7 posted 2003-08-24 05:05 AM


Wow, very beautiful write, I quite enjoyed it.
mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

8 posted 2003-08-24 02:37 PM


Thank you Annie for stopping by.
the best with your new site.

wranx, as always, greatly enjoy your visits.

Mad_Hatter, appreciate you stopping by and commenting.

again thanks all.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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