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cusick
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since 2003-07-27
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0 posted 2003-08-21 01:57 PM


NO JUSTIFICATION
The soft breeze
from the widow
turns to dreadful chill.

I watch in despair as
The message unfolds.
Desperate men trying
To righted the wrongs
of an oppressed nation.

Before me a nightmare
of black merging with
red for the right to
be heard.

Folding my hands
I pray their cries
for justice will echo
in the hearts of
every free man.


© Copyright 2003 cusick - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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1 posted 2003-08-21 02:26 PM


This made me think of someone watching the news about this UN-war we are bombarded with *EVERYYYYYYYYYY* day. Watch the birds outside. It's a much better show.


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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
2 posted 2003-08-21 05:06 PM


war is never a fun thing, but sometimes necessary, good write...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

3 posted 2003-08-22 04:48 AM


Shararose, sorry if I upset you, probably should have posted on a political forum. Maggie
cusick
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since 2003-07-27
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4 posted 2003-08-22 04:50 AM


Eor, thank you for your comments. I believe that everything shoul be written about. Maggie  
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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5 posted 2003-08-23 01:54 PM


No, cusick, this is an honest write
well done
xxoo

cusick
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since 2003-07-27
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6 posted 2003-08-24 09:08 AM


Thank you littlewing. It is all part of life. Maggie
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