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Lonely Shadow
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since 2000-03-14
Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2003-08-20 10:31 AM


overwhelming sadness
tears slowly falling
eyes full of heartache
heart shattered and torn
the agony overwhelming
endless void consuming
will the pain ever stop?
does god know I'm alive?
if I'm such a good person
why do I feel like a monster
lives I touch lying in ruin
every woman's gaze turned
cringing at my very presence
why do I deserve this hell?
will this nightmare end?
prayers go unanswered
dreams shattered in the night
joy ripped from my lifeless heart
only a living corpse remains

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2003-08-20 01:33 PM


I know this feeling entirely too well.  Good write, very emotional...
~Alicia

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-08-21 11:22 AM


These are the depths. Look up. God is the one that can love when humans can't, because we are human so we fall short of meeting expectations of other people because we are human, and make mistakes. I know. More advice than a comment...so I apologize for that, but I just felt urged to say that. No not a preachy thing just the voice of experiences in my life.

SharaRose @->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

3 posted 2003-08-21 01:51 PM


Oh dear, this sounds so sad.But I don't believe that prayers go unanswered. Try again. Maggie
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