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devina
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Cali

0 posted 2003-08-19 01:17 AM



The months of Moon
~beckon soft~
fall slow
to lips
hushed
with remember

Oh~ crimson touch-
on parched dream...
fade gentle
that I might taste
a tear in falling~
and sip the wonder
of solitude...

Challenge my brazen-
in purpled hues
of swirling, pending,
morning dew...
And breathe life
(so sweet)
into lungs of need...

Wrap me slow
in shimmer glow
of silent, creeping silver
~encompass me~
as I bathe
in eternity
of night whispers...

on the prowl.

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-08-19 09:57 AM


Awesome.
mysticpoe
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2 posted 2003-08-19 10:14 AM


You're good.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2003-08-19 01:05 PM


SweetDevina~
I was sure I heard beautiful poetry whispering from this forum~

You still rock girlfriend~
This is sooooooooooo lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2003-08-19 10:23 PM


there ya go again...oh I love how you do this.

"on the prowl"

smile.

Tis both a threat and a promise the way you write it, lovie.

scrumptious!

ShadowRaven
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since 2003-08-13
Posts 51

5 posted 2003-08-20 06:55 PM


The title was what first attracted me to this. And I wasn't disappointed!

It was wonderful. Night whispers have just taken on more beauty for me. (and I was already a huge fan!)

Raven

reianna
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since 2003-08-20
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6 posted 2003-08-20 09:27 PM


This is my first time here. When i opened this page this is the first poem that caught my attention.  I am glad it did because it was deffinatly worth the reading, and telling my friends about this site.


I hope i have found a New "home"


Reianna

[This message has been edited by reianna (08-20-2003 09:29 PM).]

eor
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blues & greys
7 posted 2003-08-20 11:29 PM


fantastic...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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