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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2003-08-18 10:27 AM


it speaks to me
implusing
wrapping around my veins
the stars
intoxicating
my very existance
it coddles...
slakes
my insecurities
it strangles
the
pain
maybe i don't
want to let go
when i find
myself falling
deeper
and deeper
within
the shadows
of
your....

SOUL


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-18-2003 02:27 PM).]

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eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-08-18 02:07 PM


"maybe i don't
want to let go
when i find
myself falling
deeper
and deeper
within
the shadows"

i loved this part, i find my sefl falling deeper and deeper, so many times i ahve felt like that...nice write

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-08-18 10:45 PM


maybe i don't
want to let go
when i find
myself falling

hard to stop that feeling, i know,
you wrote of it perfectly

Kaoru
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since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2003-08-19 12:30 PM


I'd copy my favorite parts but all of it was so good..

Love your writes.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-08-19 01:26 PM


smiling HUGE here . . .
fall, m'lady . . . fall
he will catch you
xxoo

ShadowRaven
Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 51

5 posted 2003-08-20 06:59 PM


Very nice.

The feeling of falling deeper and deeper and not wanting to let go is something I can definitely relate to.

Mad_Hatter
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since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
6 posted 2003-08-20 07:13 PM


Very dark and beautifully written.  Great write.
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