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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-08-16 06:19 PM



c'mon,
and dig a little deeper,

stomp this breathing heart,

the bruises get steeper,

now listen,
to the faint voice
rise through its keeper,

you won't take her down long too long,

her rose is blooming
through the ashes that sweep her

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-17-2003 10:02 PM).]

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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2003-08-16 09:15 PM


Nice.  Sounds a little country.  Or maybe your pic just seems that way.  Youre kinda cute.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
2 posted 2003-08-16 09:18 PM


I'm definately impressed. Good stuff here.

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

3 posted 2003-08-17 08:19 AM


I've read this a few times. I like it. Very creative.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-08-17 02:02 PM


It's good your spirit hasn't been crushed. Kudos to you..keep the fight. I did for the better part of 4 years. Can't say so much for longer than that. Blessings are wished for you.
Take care,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Kaoru
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since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2003-08-17 03:13 PM


"kinda" cute? Pfft, she's amazing.

As for the poem..
I've dug as deep as I could..
and found that perhaps
you've been in my head.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
6 posted 2003-08-17 09:35 PM


awesome mishy
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
7 posted 2003-08-17 10:00 PM


thanks green, you have good eyes!!!!!

glad to impress, lexy!

thank you mystic, for the nice words

thanks shara for the encouraging words, and yes, i don't stay down too

thank you karou..for being amazed..lol
and for     "found that perhaps
             you've been in my head."
        SPOOKY.......lol


raffi.thanks a lot, just venturing in here for a change

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