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So you called to tell me how nice the wedding was....

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Susan Caldwell
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0 posted 08-13-2003 12:56 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Susan Caldwell


Tears contained
Filling lung
How long must I pretend
Not to drown?

Silent scream
Imploding head
How long must I smile
In death?

Stagnated blood
Collapsing vein
How long must I breath
In burn?

Flog of skin
Bare to bone
How I long
To be happy

Without you

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where the wild flowers grow


1 posted 08-13-2003 03:58 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Susan

I KNOW this feeling, I feel it..
Wonderful write..as always, love.
Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada


2 posted 08-13-2003 04:10 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

I feel your pain, this just happened to me.
you will be happy again just takes time.

Thankx for sharing

lucky
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3 posted 12-06-2007 02:28 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Liked very much... I was thinking of our daughter though... but it fits purrrrfectly.

dale
Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 12-06-2007 02:31 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

*groan*

it is painful to see ones old work...

but thank you for looking and actually liking..

and hugs to your daughter, it does heal.



"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~
 
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