So you called to tell me how nice the wedding was....

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Dark Poetry #3

So you called to tell me how nice the wedding was....

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2003-08-13 12:56 PM

Tears contained
Filling lung
How long must I pretend
Not to drown?

Silent scream
Imploding head
How long must I smile
In death?

Stagnated blood
Collapsing vein
How long must I breath
In burn?

Flog of skin
Bare to bone
How I long
To be happy

Without you

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-13 03:58 PM

Susan

I KNOW this feeling, I feel it..
Wonderful write..as always, love.

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-08-13 04:10 PM

I feel your pain, this just happened to me.
you will be happy again just takes time.

Thankx for sharing

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

3 posted 2007-12-06 02:28 PM

Liked very much... I was thinking of our daughter though... but it fits purrrrfectly.

dale

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2007-12-06 02:31 PM

*groan*

it is painful to see ones old work...

but thank you for looking and actually liking..

and hugs to your daughter, it does heal.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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