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Third Libra
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0 posted 2003-08-11 08:07 PM



Nevermore do their eyes touch my skin,
nor do their ears and my voice shake hands.
Never to have our heart's kiss again,
for bestowed upon me lay a crown of thorns
that penetrate and bleed my soul within.
Plagued by the poison of hatred and demons,
I'm stranded so sadly in death to them.
This untouchable lost in the pit of conscienceness,
leaking the very essence of reality; feed my misanthropy.
Lost in this subtly overwhelming paradox of my dreams.
This hatred wraps around me, burning within me.
I am kept awake by silence, I lay in the grave that of my bed,
only to think about everything that I hate about you,
for hating everything about me; both hatred fed.
I can feel your hatred crawling into my skin;
my nose, ears, and pores to get inside my head.
But for what? To destroy my heart and soul?
To have my mind eaten by the hounds of hell, like bread?
This untouchable is a tragedy,
for everyone's a tragedy to them.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

© Copyright 2003 Michael Moore - All Rights Reserved
GG
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1 posted 2003-08-11 08:40 PM


I hate school, too.
I hope it gets better for you.. sure hasn't for me, yet.
Well written and expressed.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Third Libra
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2 posted 2003-08-12 09:20 PM


Yea, school has kinda been fustrating and it seems like everybody has to be part of a clique or whatever. Plus the administrators aren't making it easy. But hopefully it'll get better for the both of us. Thanks.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

Lil OnE
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3 posted 2003-08-13 11:22 PM


"Lost in this subtly overwhelming paradox of my dreams. This hatred wraps around me, burning within me. I am kept awake by silence, I lay in the grave that of my bed,
only to think about everything that I hate about you, for hating everything about me; both hatred fed. I can feel your hatred crawling into my skin; my nose, ears, and pores to get inside my head."

I loved this whole part so much. I feel you. This was wonderfully captured, and I hope it gets better for you. If you need to talk, I'm just an email away.

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the only one who is will never make me cry"
~Lil OnE!~


Third Libra
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4 posted 2003-08-26 06:55 PM


Thank you so much for the support. lol, and for reading.
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