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devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali

0 posted 2003-08-11 12:41 PM



Ah~sculpt me
merciful...
with iron hands-
and drip me
as mercury
in slow liquid
dance...

Mold me then-
with steady thumb,
slice the silence~
with high-pitched
'librium...

Drain my fragile pieces
into bits of dust,
Now blow so gentle darlin'
The 'settle' that used to be us...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



© Copyright 2003 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2003-08-11 01:56 PM


devina distilled...

A potent potion lady!
Give the Angel (and the rats) kisses.

NOW? how about posting in "Mature"...
turnabout, you know. hehe


littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-08-11 06:58 PM


God, your words are pure liquid flowing from the page onto my desk . . .

drip me
as mercury
in slow liquid
dance...


xxoo

22NICK22
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since 2003-05-29
Posts 54

3 posted 2003-08-11 07:06 PM


ok
eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
4 posted 2003-08-15 12:08 PM


bravo

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
5 posted 2003-08-15 06:16 AM


Another fabulous write!

We live an' learn from our mistakes
The deepest cuts are healed by faith
~ All Fired Up, P.Giraldo, M.Grombacher & K.Tolhurst

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

6 posted 2003-08-15 12:01 PM


There you are with your sweet and gentle wisdom, my sista!

(and yes, I owe you an e mail...most humble apologies, I do get side railed at times)

And now that you are home, O Mistress of the Dark, I'll have to come over here and play more.

Lovely lovely write.

Lovely lovely YOU.

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