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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Is it just lazyness Or excepting fate as its told Can I really fight it? Blinded by ..... What? What now? No excuses Truth is true No matter what happens Simple and to the point Do what you do and go Obsession never helped anyone And actually hurts every now and then Take this kink of idea and Set it free Fly Gone Relax Smooth In harmony and awww Chop to nothing Experience release Drift away One in the silence Slow Calm No more and Sleep __________________________________________________ there's not really much left to be said. enjoy. a trickle of music from a well |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Oh, but a lot was said and i did enjoy. Props! Props! |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thanx Icy. I didnt feel i could have said any more a trickle of music from a well |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gis, I've noticed that you've improved a great deal.. I've read all your stuff, and I love it.. Keep it comin'. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Hey Kaoru, thanx. Im hoping this site will help my poetry improve even more. Thanx again. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You have unleashed a powerful demon that lurks within us all here... raising a two year old? yep. now that comes close to this. smiles. enjoyed this you!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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22NICK22 Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 54 |
pretty neat |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx devina. No I dont have kids lol. I am glad you enjoyed this piece though. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
Very short, left me wanting more, but it's good like it is, you still said everything. La di da, Lex You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you Lexia. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
good one, but i have seen better from you, not to take any away from this one tho... when you wrote "in harmony and awwww" did you mean awwww, or awe? "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Awwww like in wonder or almost amazement. Thanx> GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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